Tuesday 9/24 How do you feel about your college essay as of right now? What are your goals for this week?

Right now, I’m feeling a little bit frustrated with my essay. Even though I spent a lot of time and effort on it, I feel like it doesn’t convey what I want it to. I think my self-reflection could be stronger, and I’ve been revising it to make it flow better. My goal for this week are to make a more equal (60-40) ratio between the narrative and reflection, since the narrative is a little too long right now. Another goal of mine is to make my reflection much more broad than my narrative, in order to show how I’ve grown as a person.